First Draft Feedback

Our teacher Ms. Vincent gave us feedback during her critique session. She mentioned that we should make our narrative more concise, aiming for a two-minute duration, and also stressed the need to introduce a more significant conflict to engage the audience effectively. Additionally, Ms. Vincent suggested exploring different music choices that would better match the tone and mood of the scene, highlighting the importance of sound design in immersing the audience. She also pointed out that the voiceover was too loud, emphasizing the importance of achieving a balanced audio mix for the best viewing experience. Through Ms. Vincent's help we were started fixing parts in our opening film.

After It All - First Draft

 Here our team has finally finished the initial version of our opening film. We added all the different things we've learned throughout the year, from the details of setting up a scene to the subtleties of dialogue and sound production. The members duction Manager Jade Sweeting, Director Dakota Montgomery, Film Writers Dakota Montgomery and Shanique Dennis, and Cinematographer Shanique Dennis, helped bringing our vision to life. Dakota Montgomery also took on the responsibilities of Casting Director, Camera Operator, and Editor, while Bra’niyah Myrick contributed as a co-writer. Our talented cast, led by Shanique Dennis as Sabrina, Christina Walker as Jae, Dakota Montgomery as Tony, and supported by Jade Sweeting, Jayden, and Cherish Greenidge brought life to their roles. During this we did run into some problems such as coordinate everyone's schedules, and many people had to reschedule multiple times we still got it done.